Update:

I have been working on my evaluation over the holidays, whilst also looking at some issues with my production. I have found that I really need to re-shoot some of my footage, in some instances, because of camera shake, plot holes in which Holly, the protagonist, sits down and the reason doesn't quite come across to the audience as well as the ending, which I believe looks good, but I would like to try different endings and camera angles, also, so that I can choose which one's better.